Love this story and the subtle way the visuals play into it. At first I was frustrated with how the additional detail links blended into the passage, but I think it speaks to the story you want to tell and how, if you're not paying attention, you'll miss it. I hit a dead end once after the green "time to enjoy your party" end link after playfully fighting with your sister and attempting to play for the best ending. You did a great job making me feel guilty in the neutral ending, additionally! The middle, neutral route made me feel very uncomfortable (in a good way) that I think the red ending didn't get me. Great work!