i dont wanna spoil anything so in advance no harm in my comment intended if reader feels that.
I absolutely love this story, the good/bad and right/wrong and positive/negative psychology in the story is amazing. makes the vieuwer think about it i hope, i sure did.
And i really like you put jinx in, i have never seen a woman like her in a VN and i like you did it. i actually got a little worried at some point ;) and she is an absolute beauty if you ask me.
great work man!!
btw. as a noob in VN terminology icome across this NTR but i cant figure out what it means lol, anyone can help me out? cheers