Thank you for the much needed input, This is the first game I have made on my own and not for school. I am very inexperienced in the developing of these games but I am a very avid consumer so I understand what makes these games popular, but This intro was just meant to catch the eye of people who will hopefully stick with this project. I do plan to implement some sound, namable protagonist, custom font, and a gallery in the next update. Can I use that updated script you made? I am using the basic knowledge I have of python and the ren'py engine so this simple solution helps me tremendously to clean up the mess my code was.
Thank you,
TOILETdev