Everything happens too fast and it looks like jumping to the good parts of the story, cutting the challenges, the conflicts, the problem solving... and going direct to the prize. Theres a lot of: minutes later, the next day, a week later and i think these cuts can be filled with the missing parts of a good story structure.
Its nice to see the quality of the animations improving in the new chapters.
Really like the movie references.
Good work and keep improving