Hi here is some honest feedback for you, it stated out great but after the scene when nat was talking to her dad i it she was dreaming if fine but after that the face never went away and so far has not gone away yet, and it wrecked what was a good read i personal think it should gone away before the 2 woman go to the beach it got that off putting i stopped reading it at the point i tuck a screen cap as shown below. thanks, mr gatez.
