Sooo... who is Dax? They just appeared with Crow but the MC already knows them. How?
It's just too much new people appeared at one place and i got overwhelmed.
Before that trip to the forest everything was greate and exciting. However, it would not hurt to describe the appearance of the characters more
You should definitely check the author's tumblr - they put character descriptions there, and there are even portraits of the romantic options if you scroll down in the main post about the game. Since the tumblr isn't linked here, it seems, I'll just give you the link (I don't think the author would have any issues with that?):
https://carrs-universe-if.tumblr.com/post/669059034766360576/a-body-horrorpsycho...