Thank you, I apologize for all the grammar mistakes. Today I uploaded an update with plenty of corrections (I know it's late, but I didn't want to leave it like that). The biggest problem I had was using past vs present tense when describing actions. At the beginning he's clearly talking about the past but when he gets to the end I was never sure how to describe things as they happened. I know it's kind of awkward in some spots because of that. If you have any resourses on writting/story-telling techniques to recommend, I'd be glad to check them out.