The wording/phrasing is a bit off. The sprite has arms too muscular/upper body not muscular enough. Same may be for legs, but the pants seem looser than the shirt, so may not be needed as they would be able to hide the muscle. Anatomy just seems a bit disproportionate. I feel like there could be more detail, but you could be only going over details quickly for the intro, so I can't say much there. Lots of wall breaks, jeez... XD at least you use my kind of humor! ^^ I feel like you named your novel based on that he is trying to get back home, but the journey is dangerous, just like his voyage home was.
Wow, your review is very well observed on the game I'm impressed. (>w>)... First of all, yes I know that the words are not as good and aesthetic as how I wanted them to be but I'm a self-learner in English so I'm sorry if my grammar or vocabulary had somehow missed the point of the lore. Secondly, yes I do notice about the sprite's anatomy is a bit off with the arms as well with the legs but tbh due to the bunches of assignments that are looming inside my head that constantly reminded me to do I was not motivated enough to fix them. In another word, I was procrastinating (with the covid and all :3). And that's why I'm planning on redrawing the sprite once I've got all of my college assignments done approximately at the end of December. So please bear with me, aight? (QwQ)/... Also, by "wall breaks" do you mean the "4th wall"? Cuz if you do then yes, I just like the idea of how my oc interact with someone(including me) in real life. It's kinda exciting if you think about it, you know what I mean? \(^w^)/... Last but not least, your indication about the title is pretty accurate. However, of course, there's more to it than meets the eye behind the title name but if you wanna know more about them, be sure to read more of my vn in the future. (>wÓ)/(Don't forget to give a like and ratings too while you're at it! XDXD)