Hi Conner,
I love a good media experience, so this is such a cool idea. You nailed the atmosphere and the ending was amazing. Also your reading style reminded me a lot of No Sleep Podcast which is a compliment, it’s the perfect delivery to create a sense of uncanny terror. I hope you continue this intertwined story-telling but be bold enough to insert your music more, honestly, if I had developed this, I would have blasted it during the intro, the outro and inbetween, so it sticks (I love the gramophone idea but since it’s easy to miss, people miss out on your music and they really shouldn’t).