I find the text at the beginning too hard to read. It is very small. I also find there is a bit too much "story" in the beginning before the actual game, I realize it only 4 minutes but I totally forgot I wasnt playing a visual novel when the actual game started up. Especially since there is a time limit it seems on how many potions you can make.
I think the game has good potential. Tightening up the story in the beginning so its only 1-2 minutes would be better. A larger, easier to read font and remove the time limit or put an actual clock so you know your time limit, and I think it's be most ideal!
The art is adorable, and I like the game play, mostly. It was be frustrating but thats part of the game and it's fun to get so close and OOPS! Although I did notice that when I was making potions, I was writing it down, and x+y+z=perfect eyes. When I was dinking around to get other parts and the eyes messed up I tried x+y+z and the eyes were still messed up. So I am wondering if its just a glitch, or if the potions are random or what. Either way, I think this is a good start to a game.