This was very well done! I noticed a few small typos (there instead of their, for instance) and wish I could have had a chance to visit hidden lake ;) but no complaints here. Nice one!
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Thanks, glad you liked it!
I've had problems with my there, they're and their since I was 10 years old! (Also too, two and to, and its and it's)
Yes, I would have loved to spend some more time fleshing out the world a bit more. I may do that, or I may do a similar riff on it for another project. Thanks again for the comment!