I never played the original Free Writer, but I'm super glad I got around to finally diving into the experience with this Director's Cut version!
The whole game feeds into the experience of being led on a merry dance around the house, being drip-fed tiny pieces of story in between being stalked from the darkness. The tension is great, the story is great and the payoff is well worth it!
You did a fantastic job with this, and aside from a few grammatical errors that got lost in translation it was a wonderfully spooky time!
Keep up the awesome work =)