I really enjoyed this, and it's so inspiring to see that there's so much you can do with twine! I've just started experimenting with it for my first game, and there's tons I want to go back and try after playing this. The story was interesting and engaging, and I could really picture the different locations. I like the fact that it's separated into acts and lets me save and come back later. I also really like your choice of color and font - and your map! Such a cool game :)