I love the humor in this, how casual the monster-talk is (like, "oh yeah, my family is from Venus"). If this were developed further it'd be nice to see different character portraits for different expressions, reacting according to the player's response. Also, formatting-wise, I think it would look nicer if the character art and text lined up a bit better. As of now it looks like the character art is just kind of slapped there above the text. Maybe having the picture centered and a bit bigger, with the text lined up underneath it? That's just one option though, there are tons of ways to format it. As people mentioned there are a couple missing or broken picture links, but that's an easy fix. Great concept, would love to see it developed more if you choose to!