Viability: The details and descriptions were amazingly done! Every single option is so well thought out, I would love to see this go even further with some of the endings. It was a small detail, but I really like how each ending was labeled on its respective screen; it helped to navigate through the game, and sometimes when I thought I would get the same ending, to my surprise it was different!
Presentation: Due to the lack of illustrations, sometimes the huge walls of text can be a bit daunting to read. I know it's just a prototype and there was no way for enough time to do all the pictures this game has the potential for, but I wanted to mention it to keep in mind if you decide to go further with this. Sometimes people are off put by huge walls of text; maybe simply breaking up the text with clickable arrows or something to divide it to smaller sections at a time may be a way to make it more easy to read without the labor of tons more pictures.
Theme: I love the scenery and setting described in the introduction, a very well done fantasy environment! I immediately went for the option of helping the little dragon as my first route, I love the enemy-to-friend with an animal theme. Everything is already so detailed and cohesive, I can only imagine what images would do to help bolster this!
Engagement: This is SO well written and fleshed out! The descriptions are amazing, this is like its own book! It had me keep reading non stop till the end. 10/10 for engagement.
-Tina