Viability: I enjoyed the different endings, I didn't expect that I would be able to escape but leave my friends behind, it actually made me feel guilty! It was fun to play through the different endings.
Presentation: The little bird drawings were so cute! If there was more time to work on this/if it were developed further in the future, it'd be interesting to have little dialogue boxes with the birds' pictures next to their text. More illustrations as a whole would be great in the future, it has a great storybook feel to it!
Theme: The quick, sketchy and cross-hatched lines were a really nice style to compliment the aesthetic of the game. I really like the dark color scheme (I might be biased though), it adds to the mysterious element.
Engagement: The eagle character was well done, I loved how mysterious it was, and the shock factor of the sudden betrayal.
-Tina