Viability: The mechanic where your chicken can actually die and then you start playing as a different chicken is interesting, maybe for more replayability the narrative could change a bit, since we are now a different character? Maybe the second chicken notices something the first didn't, or vice versa.
Presentation: The background image should be darker, or the text have a slight black border or something to make it stand out better. It is a bit hard to read in some places, and the links themselves are very hard to read (especially after clicking them). The sound is jarring, and while I think it does help establish the atmosphere of the game, it is too much. The low quality of it and loudness (even with the volume as low as it can go) is too distracting for me to listen to it and read (maybe I just have short attention span though).
Theme: The theme itself is hilarious, being a chicken on a murder mission. If this is developed more in the future, maybe having more endings would be cool, like after the chicken is free to see what they do with their freedom, or having one where the chicken and farmer reconcile their differences and become friends.
Engagement: I know it's not particularly important, but there are many typos and grammar errors. A few isn't bad, but there are too many here where it is a bit distracting from what I am actually reading.
-Tina
I agree with what you said, Tina. The biggest difficulty I had was with the text color and the audio was also very distracting for me. However, the story is very funny and unique! I would love to see some different backgrounds, illustrations, or even a small animation that could add to the comedy (if adding gifs are possible, idk). Maybe like an among us inspired quick animation of the chicken stabbing the farmer- that would be really funny loll