HOLY CRAP! That was just... too much to mention it all!!!
An initial release that is the length of possibly 3 to 4 builds of other VNs!
There are still several grammatical errors, several, but only up to one per line/code of dialogue, fa too many to mention here. That is just how much content you have put into this showing!
I'm hoping for more sprites/characters as you go on (some can be subtle (few or only one sprite) or CG only, such as the initial figure, and the owner of restaurant (at your digression of course if you wish to do so)), as well as more of the minigames with upped difficulty/complexity as the story goes on (especially the card or card related ones, going to be many battles of various sorts ahead!?)
If you can make the next release even half as awesome at least, I'm going to have to pitch in to help you along, I'm that floored!