https://twitter.com/gacrivastudio/status/1399683233508364288
Previous contest post for #PitchYaGame
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Maybe less green check marks
here is finalist from last year that did a similar style post but they used different emojis for each listed item
https://twitter.com/AlexGoodwinDev/status/1399840887753121795
Hi Gacriva, swap the checkmarks out for other emojis to provide variety, otherwise it looks like a task list. The trailer is extremely jarring, first get straight into the action, don't bother about posting your studio name and the "presents". I'm confused about whether or not this is one game or 5, one is a zombie shooter, one looks like skyrim, one is about a car, one is an alien, each one has their own UI, it looks more like a game mashup than a game trailer, reel it in a bit!
Thank you for your feedback. This is a very complex description: One entity with different bodies, different time zones, one storyline but different background stories in different time periods. Indeed has 3 gameplay styles in only one game, it is hard to do a short “trailer” of it, without a text to not boring the player, and with short gameplay footage because has many gameplay styles in one game. also, I have this but again has the text: https://twitter.com/gacrivastudio/status/1371196909755449346 again boring the player by reading it without seeing the gameplay. And this: https://twitter.com/gacrivastudio/status/1324498117069295616 was gaining some traction thought.
Maybe now you will continue give me feedback.