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Hey, thanks for sharing your thoughts! I'm glad the mental illness/alienation connections came through - I was worried it might have been a bit too opaque... And that's really interesting about the jump from the computer to the bed jarring with the music, I'll have to think a bit more about how I could make a transition like that smoother.
Also, I think it should fade out at the end if you float back to the bed. I wanted to let people take their time in that last area, but I see what you mean, there's not really much indication about the end at all.
Thanks again for the comments!