*hope it at least makes you smile*
Well, considering I'm currently snorting with laughter, at the "being shot by a crossbow while sat at a toilet" part...that's a underestimation...
Also the protagonist (what's his name again...Oynx something something Crow Path??? The Great???) is reeaaaaaally cute XD Alright I'm gonna finish the rest of the game, it's really amazing for a first VN, keep up the good work :)