Hmm, I played the same game and although there may have been some minor errors with wording, it all still flowed. But then again I am not a grader on English 101. As for the comment on being too short, that is insane! How long does someone want for a free adult VN? Which leads to the next cray comment regarding H scenes not being many or long enough. All I can say is maybe the developer modified in the last seven to nine days, oops, nope, same game for the last ten days lol. Nice flowing story Raybae. Not sure if this is your first release but your on the right track. Good luck.