This game has a lot going for it; the CGs and portraits are all great, and the management simulation gameplay loop makes for an engaging experience. Unfortunately, as with most games I've played from this dev, the English translation borders on being nonsensical, and the soundtrack is less than stellar.
I don't know if the dev has any intentions of updating their older games, but just from looking at the JSON containing all the dialog, it really wouldn't cost all that much to get this game professionally translated.
I believe the quality of Broke Girl would be greatly elevated by a proper translation.