Well-written game, really enjoyable! You get to learn to appreciate each character as an actual character, where many NSFW VNs only seem to use these caricatures or cardboard cutouts. I only have two or three gripes with the game.
The first one is the pace is *very* slow. That's not necessarily a bad thing for a game like this where you're trying to experience all their emotions and the world would involve a lot of waiting, but there are several moments where you're sitting there essentially reading the same characters say the same things in different ways for 30 minutes or even an hour. It also means that there's stuff that is hinted at ages away I essentially know you're going to use, but I'm just sitting there waiting for it to pay off.
The other one, which may be seen as kinda minor, is the logic gaps for some characters. This isn't really human error, it's more just confusion at choices you'd *expect* to be made (or at least thought about) that aren't there. An example [minor spoiler] is when MC chooses to slash the tires of a van. For someone who went on and on about how the Charger wasn't the best car (once again another example of consistent repetition of the same thing in different way), but he sees a van he can get into and his only thought is "oh it's useless, time to slash its tires". If it's older than like 30 years old, it could even be able to be picked without a key and work relatively fine. So for *Carol* to be the one to point that fact out, it felt a bit weird. I'd actually expect Carol to say to slash the tires rather than the MC, since his decisions are largely pragmatic. I assume it was more just done to give you the option of choice?
Oh also, edit: I'm kinda sad [another minor spoiler] you didn't get the choice about Lori's photo? That almost felt like a significant character that you'd be allowed to decide, even if it's insignificant to the plot