The music is awesome. This is the only game in the entire jam, that I rated 5 for audio (and I played and rated 100 games already).
I actually played a couple of times, with choices I make "flipped", but wasn't able to survive. Maybe I'll try again later, when you have an update.
My main suggestion would be: try to make the game more welcoming to people unfamiliar with SCP (like myself), because it seems like there were quite a lot of terms used and I was somewhat lost.
Another suggestion: make it clear who you currently play as and who talks. At moments I wasn't sure if the current line is said by my character or by someone else.
Now I recalled there is actually a third small suggestion: when something happens in the text (and not speaking), you can separate it from speech either visually or for example with <>
(e.g. Player: Would you like to <raises hand> touch my hand?)