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(Lynis, please read this and reply to me of your opinion)

Hi! I'm ever played the game at my old laptop(but now is broken so it can't be fixed. Also I'm using a computer right now). The game is fun and nice!

If I were you, I would update the game(again).

Changes I wish:

1. Detailing the other NPC in the game (Dogs, Cat, Ann, Belle, The guy that tied-up in the closet, and The old man that Olivia thinks he is the next door neighbour)

2. Escaping the guy that tied up in the closet and turned into escape ending / Home sweet home ending(Doggy saves the poor guy, and the guy is the new owner of Doggy)

3. Draw other face's of the other NPC in the chat box(The old man, The Dogs and a Cat at the park, etc)

4. Doggy new replies(example: When Olivia's basement gets on fire, Doggy says: "Olivia.....You must go to hell! Because you k1ll3d my F****ing Family!!!")

5. The character has a voice(Olivia, Ann, Belle, etc)

6. Lastly, they have a scene(Olivia takes a hammer to hit Doggy, When Doggy talk to his elder brother, Choco{I called him Choco BTW})

And that's all. Ouh and also, You inspired me to make a room art ^^