Hey! I just checked out the game! I didn't see before but I didn't know that this was your first game, awesome job! You said you were looking for feedback so I'd be happy to share! First off I really like the ideas going on here. Not exactly with the story but with the pacing and the overall gameplay. I feel there's a good flow going on. Where I think it doesn't do so well is the pacing and scares. I said it in the video but that model is synonymous with "bad" horror games, at least in my opinion. So seeing that model always makes me laugh lol. I think having a bit more to do in each area, maybe a puzzle or two, and a little more subtlety with the scares would go a long way. I had a fun time playing and had plenty of good laughs. Thanks for making it!