Heyo ~
I thought that the theme was really cool, I loved the menu UI and introductory screen with the quote.
This has been mentioned before, but I think that a tutorial would have been really nice. I don't think that the core mechanics of the game are things you need to guess to figure out, rather this should be explored through story elements and interesting puzzles. I think you might have even been able to forgo a tutorial if there were some labels on the multiple percentage bars in the UI.
I really hope that you continue to explore this theme and gameplay, I think this could be a pretty phenomenal fully realized game. Well done!