I appreciate your video very much. Thank you. I really have to improve on the dialogues (I'm not a native speaker and writing natural dialogues feels very difficult to me). One small thing, I'm currently developing the game alone (artwork, models, animations and programming) and seeing someone else play the game helps me a ton to realize where I have to improve so again thanks for the video.
Regarding the second part I guess I should add a way to censor the game at some point in the future. Also you can rotate around them during the sex scene by pressing the middle mouse button (the wheel usually), I should show a display message explaining the controlls at the start of a scene. It is somewhere explained in the text that comes up when hitting escape.