This was an interesting horror game that made use of seemingly pure & innocent stories with a twist at the end. The sound effects and the jumpscares played the main role of scaring the player in the second chapter while in the first and third chapter, it was more of the atmospheric experience. For me, the jumpscare of the picture in chapter 2 got me good with the jumpscare and I see how you have implemented what you did in your previous horror game as well as the weird dreams series into this game.
I felt that much more could have been done to the game to make it even scarier such as allowing for more player interaction with the surroundings to slowly discover each piece of the storyline themselves and using sound effects less funky XD. The sound effects did make the game scarier but it didn't really match the theme of the game. Also, some of the jumpscares used didn't really impact me as a player due to its design (It looks copy and pasted). The paragraphs at each beginning of the chapters are missing punctuations and line spacing in general.
I hope to see even more improvements in your games and I wish you good luck in your future endeavours. You can email me if you are interested.