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I finished the game yesterday, and let me say, I am in love with this. I FRICKIN LOVE THIS A LOT. First of all, I love how you humanized Don Pedro and Don Diego and making them more than just "Jealous Brother 1" and "Jealous Brother 2" (How dare you make them mostly my type in fictional men!!!). Secondly, I love the art! The backgrounds, the character design, the music. EVERYTHING! I really like how the art style really feels like something from a fairy tale. Thirdly, I really like how you handled the original characterization from the original story and transitioning it to this one. Mostly Don Juan's, since I kept asking myself while I was playing that 'didn't Don Juan have at least 2 girlfriends in the aftermath of Ibong Adarna?' and I literally almost screamed when Don Pedro said that he has a habit for falling in love with the maids since when we were forced to read it in 7th grade I was thinking of Don Juan as either a cheater, or literally falls in love with every woman he comes across. Fourthly, I love their family dynamic. Not only does it make sense for this story, but for the original too! Since they never really knew each other when they were younger, and basically had a non-existent relationship. Fifthly, Addie is a really good main character. She may be a little confused sometimes, but she means well. I love and adore her very much. I would die for her.

All in all, I really adore the story so far! For the question on who's route I would do first, probably Juan's (since he's the og story's protagonist, it makes sense that he should go first), then I'd flip a coin for Diego or Pedro (I really won't be able to decide). 

Also, when you finish the whole game, would you still let it be playable on desktop?

Anyways, even though it isn't finished yet, it already holds a special place in my heart. And when the full game eventually comes out, I know that I will love it to pieces. 

Take care, Anta!

Thanks for the comprehensive feedback! I've actually been contemplating on what to do with the backgrounds going further, since they originally came out that way cause I was rushing this for the jam and had to use a style that's easiest for me to do, so I wasn't sure if it was fitting ^^"

Glad you liked their characterization! I actually did try to base their personalities off the original, and Don Juan was honestly the most difficult to figure out. I had more leeway with Pedro and Diego since they have a lot of character developing I could play around with XD

As for the full version- I probably can't have it be playable on browser cause of size limitations (that one will stay as demo), but it'll definitely be released for desktop (Windows, Linux and Mac). Android will just be secondary. 

Again, thanks for taking time to post this. It really helps :)