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Check this demo out it was short but really good.  There are few things I noticed that could use a look at. 

1. The newspaper in the bathroom needs a grammer check. I love the backstory but it just need to flow better.

2. Some of the door animations just disappear.

3. Consider lengthening the demo a little bit. Where it ends now is kind of sudden and mabey should end after going through a door or something? Just to make it a bit better.

Other than that I loved it and can't wait for the full game. I will definitely be a buyer.

Keep going!!!

Those are credical feedback! Thank you for playing!