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Okay its in the same document as the other story, but I want to see what you think of the story so far.

Trying hard to give it a more sappy feeling

sorry if it's weird just god the two of them are OTP, when Oolie started cry I just wanted to hug her. So cute!

Edit 1. I think I figured out why I like her, I relate hardcore to her so much. Like wow the being big and scary shit, hits home.

Impy2 years ago(+1)

You've got a fun interpretation of the characters, I really like it!

Definitely very sweet.

(In my in-game version of events, Espa hates the idea of Percy in a dress and gets jealous that Ram picks him over her. But I like your version, you don't have to change it to match.)

Shanog2 years ago(+1)

that would make sense, I was just going off of her love of his butt. Problems of being one behind, but thats on me.

Does Oolie fit though? I know its more brief I'm just trying to get the best snap shot of her personality.

Impy2 years ago(+1)

I think all the characters fit quite well. It's creative fiction, so it's more fun if you make them your own in some ways.

Shanog2 years ago(+1)

Thanks, and seriously you're great for being cool with interpretations. Anyways keep up the great work!

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