This was a really cute game! I kinda thought that Marcus would be more important to the story, since most other characters either don't have sprites or look like Percival. That said, I'm glad that the game didn't go in the direction of a love triangle or anything, having Owen and Junia's relationship as the focus got me super invested. I thought that the "I have a bad feeling about Percival" thing was going somewhere though? I also wish we got to see a bit more of the town and Junia's connections to everyone.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I absolutely agree and would have loved to spend additional time on Marcus's role in the story, as well as fleshing out Junia's relationships to others in the town. If I were to redo the story of Alloys Over Flowers outside of NaNoRenO's 30-day time constraint, those would be some of the top priority improvements on my list.
I'm super happy to hear that you enjoyed Alloys Over Flowers -- thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts on the game! <3