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I might post again when I've done an actual playthrough. For now, my first impressions:

  • So far, they only solo pro wrestling TRPG I've encountered. That already makes it stand out.
  • The first pro wrestling TRPG I've seen that puts the focus squarely on 'shoot'/out-of-ring goals and actions, i.e. my player character is the wrestler/performer, not (necessarily) their gimmick persona... which makes perfect sense for a Second Guess game.
  • It seems to lack a recognizable end state. 
    • That is, spell it out: "At 6 Going Over points, you've won a crowd following and/or the respect of your peers and/or a backstage reputation as a solid worker". 
    • Conversely, what are the implications of reaching 6 Going Home points, beyond the obvious?
  • The wording assumes the player is a smark, or at least somewhat familiar with basic concepts (chain wrestling, "big moves"), and terminology (gimmick, heel, booker). That's fine if you know who you're writing for. However, even with a $1 price tag, there's a chance this might attract players who are into solo journaling games, but not necessarily indie wrestling.

On a more personal note, I live in a city (Metro Manila, Philippines) where there are still major restrictions on live sports (entertainment) events.  So this seems like *exactly* the kind of vicarious distraction I appreciate right now.

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Hey there! Thanks for checking out Going Over, and giving your thoughts! Really appreciate it. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated, and will be considered for any revisions that need to be made.

Doing a one-pager was an experiment for me, because I tend to be long-winded. Wanted to address the Getting Over and Going Home points. A match is meant to end when you get a Going Home point, and roll 1d6. If you roll under your current Going Home points, the match continues. If you roll that number or higher, you go into the finish. Roll 1d6 again, and if you roll above your Getting Over points, then you're booked to win. Either way, journal the finish of the match, how you figure the crowd would react, and what your character's thoughts and feelings on the finish would be. From there, you could start another match with that character, or try something else. I could revise this to make it more clear, in the text.

I did write this with an intent to firmly entrench it within almost obnoxious smarkiness. Perhaps a revision could include a glossary, or I could give some definitions here in the store page description. Thank you for pointing that out, I could stand to make the game more accessible to those outside that audience.

I am there with you on needing a distraction, right now. The small indie I've recently joined up with is just starting to put on live shows again (socially distanced, screened, and all), but I don't know how much longer that'll be the case with COVID numbers rising again. For now, glad that this could provide a distraction for you, hope it was enjoyable, and thank you so much for the support!

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Oh, I forgot to mention... Since you clearly put a lot of effort into the pacing, might as well submit this for the One-Page RPG Jam too. It definitely qualifies, being published squarely within the Jam period.