Hi undaembra! I apologize again for the late reply ;w; your comment made me really happy!
Dreamquartz is an old game and I often look back at it only for the mistakes, so reading your comment made me realize (and see again) the good and the effort I put into it >\\\< I'm so glad you liked the story, even short as it is!
Not to mention I'm so happy to hear that my prose in English is good! It's not my mothertongue and for Dreamquartz I wrote directly in English, I've always feared it wouldn't convey emotions in an effective way compared to my mothertongue (looks like blood and violence are my best shots, but I enjoy writing them to be honest)
Writing characters is my favorite part and yes, Mihal is forgiving but he also doesn't trust to full extent the others, he's from a secluded community and travelled for the first time alone afterall x3 as for Ashur the key was playing as he expected (being disrespectful, cold, proud, etc) so you'd confirm his idea of all human beings, but shocking him with good deeds looked more fun right? xD
If I had more time I would have liked to implement the functionalities of the camera and also fleshing out the final part of the story a little better but I was tight on the Jam's timeline... so for now it remains just a joke to mess with Mihal's naivity xD
Thank you again for playing my little game ;\\\; your comments fill me with lots of confidence too and it's a period I really needed that, so thank you twice >\\\<