Encountered minor bugs and mistakes. PC edition.
#1 - During the day, I tried to enter Janet's shop. The game slowed or froze for a while, about 15-20 seconds. After that, a message said her shop was closed. However, I still had options to buy things, tip, and so on.
#2 - The pictures for the level 20 and 40 achievements are switched.
#3 - After the attack on Soren's cart, I tried speaking with him during the day. I received coins, but no dialogue. I think that I used Water, and Bluff, as my choices. This feels off to me.
#4 - When fishing with a fully sized catch bar, going all the way to the right would have some of the bar leave the fishing zone. Kinda ugly aesthetically, and might make the mini-game slightly harder.
#5 - It seems like the "star" tab in the inventory has the same item selection as the triple-dash symbol to the left of it. My guess is that it meant to display key items?
Thoughts on mini-games
Archery: You could add a slight layer of skill, by having the arrow's reach determined by how long you nock the arrow. Provided that charging takes enough time, the player would have to put more thought into which targets to go for.
Aside from that, the target in the upper-left is visually obscured, only revealing the legs. I am guessing they belong to a beast girl. I think it might be good to swap her position with that of a small standard target, so that players can admire her upper features.
Fishing
It works, but could use more stuff to do. Like the bar game, maybe small treasures could pop up that the player needs to hover over. In addition to that, I think the visual design of the catch bar could be used for gameplay. At one end of that bar, is a small fishing hook. Maybe if the player lines it up with the fish's mouth, it could have more difficulty moving around or be caught more quickly.
More thoughts:
When I was asked to specify Scarlett's relationship with Ivy, I wasn't sure if there was any gameplay consequences for giving a title. For example, what about "Lover" or "Sister"? It might be nice to offer a list of possibilities, if they have effects.