Great thanks for your review! I would gladly hire a editor and proofreader if there will be funds for that. Right now I can only afford a proofreader that can fix the errors, but editors are kinda expensive.
I fund this project from my own pocket and I'm from a country where you can live for a month with just 300$ in valet. But I will try my best to find some money and reliable editor who will be able to help with text ^__^ If you know any - let me know!
If I won't be able to find editor I still promise the text will be without grammar errors and written by native speaker. And funds from this game will be saved to pay for editor work for the next game :3