I think the gameplay itself it the best part of the game. The cutscenes were very quick and jarring. Also I don't think it's the visuals themselves but maybe the lighting made the game really hard to look at for me. Maybe there was some kind of filter that my eyes just didn't like? Also one small nitpick I had was the paper noise. It's totally fine that they make noise but the fact that the noise kept going while I was trying to read was very distracting. Cool ideas for sure though. If this was expounded upon I think it would make an awesome hour or so experience. Thank you for making the game!