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I'm enjoying the game but the writing could be improved. I understand that English is not everyone's first language.

I have made this offer before and proofread and edited games and books before.

If you want me to fix the writing for free, let me know and you can email me all the text which I will correct.

If this seems rude or presumptuous, I apologise, but for something this fun and with so much to read it would really aid the overall experience if it made sense.

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Hi, friend! Thank you for the offer. I already have a proofreader for my second game and maybe you’ll want to check it out. “Dark path”,  I have to mention it is waaaaay better than “the beginning” in all of the aspects. Because you know - experience, time and stuff…

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