I liked the concept in general, but in some parts it did feel lacking. A lot of the English contained mistakes to the point that it was a bit tedious to try and figure out what each sentence meant. This is rather important since the text for a visual novel is always a large component of the game and story.
Some of the illustrations also looked a bit stretched out and not as intended - I'm not sure if this is just a problem with the game window resizing them for the resolution I wanted or not. Assuming it's just a glitch, the art was very beautiful though - great job on it.