I think it was a great way of storytelling, that you followed in this jam entry. With short notes / thought bubbles you managed to develop a character, which evolved more and more in my mind the longer I played the game. It's such a simple, but effective game design! Thank you very much for this little gaming experience, which I happily recommended in one article on our blog and also uploaded a gameplay video for. :) Keep it up!
Best wishes,
Sebastian