That was impressive, especially that scene in the attic, that was pretty spooky. I was kind of pissed off about the wish the kid made though, after what his Mom said to him earlier, but that means I was actually sucked into the plot-line which is a great thing. Well done!
1 year ago(+1)
I'm glad you liked it! I think I know what you mean. You thought he would wish to bring his father back? That idea came to my mind when I wrote it, but I thought it would be "too much" somehow. What do you think?