Constructive criticism: I feel like this could be a fun concept, but it needs some work. For one, I think you should run it by someone who speaks English as a first language, as the many errors are jarring. Second, the lack of music and visuals makes the entire thing sort of drag on, and the lack of choices makes it more like reading scrawling text with no goal. I think you can fix it and make it more successful, but as is, it's easy to start feeling bored as you're clicking through.
Hello, Thank you for the game out.
Some errors were made intentionally while others are simple spelling mistakes. And the lack of visuals is intentional since i want to feel like a bug in a platformer game, The lack of music is errors on the music that doesnt operate. But keep in mind this game was made in a time limit. Thank you so much.