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I'd say it was okay, it was your first game so it's understandable. Few things I'd suggest is maybe working on some textures, and maybe make sure most of the music on the game has a loop so it doesn't just all of a sudden stop. The models weren't to bad they just seemed a little unfinished. I'm sure you'll learn the more you create though, keep on creating. Haha, and remember to enjoy what you're making as well.