Looking good :D I appreciate the character customization & the variety of choices, definitely looking forward to future updates.
Some (maybe unnecessary) advice for twine: From what I've known so far, Sugarcube tends to be more complex to code & offers more complex features, more akin to real codings, while Harlowe is more basic but can offer basic functions like save & load on every page as well. Instructions of detailed features for both can be found on twine's cookbook page. Suit yourself on which one to use :)