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in "you are bisexual" I mentioned that the creator needed to learn "Show don't tell." And I'll be damned this is a great way of showing, though improvement can still be made this is still a good example of show don't tell. 

also it is perfectly paced, not to short, not to long. just the length it needed to be to deliver it message and themes. resounding improvement

the sprite work could use some work but that's of little importance. though i did like how the color changed to match the intensity self loathing

over all the amount of improvement from "you are bisexual" to this is staggering. it makes me so happy to see Rascal improve her art. good job! know that I will be one of the first to play whatever you have next.