Like everyone else, I have to give you a big thumbs up for this. Superb storyline, done really well. Laugh, smile, romantic, horny, sad, you go for the emotions and nail it pretty much every time. Love the characters too, whilst nobody stands out to me yet on a par with Lucy from MNF, (Sabrina and Anna are definitely close though,) its still very early days. Also love the quality of the artwork.
Sorry to say I spotted the twist at the end of the prologue almost as soon as the characters were introduced, but that didnt lessen my enjoyment at all.
I also agree completely with your philosophy of storyline before lewds, the storyline is what makes your work special, I would read it even without the artwork. Not saying the images arent nice, they are, but I can find lewd pictures in loads of places on the web. Context is what elevates the whole.
MNF and MNM are absolutely in the top few Visual Novels Ive looked at so far, exactly what I want.
One request though, I want to support both games on Patreon, but cant stretch to the Full Package, would you consider adding a tier merging the Lucy and Sarah tiers? (Maybe call it the Fan Service tier and have the thumbnail for it a picture of them both together.)
Thank you again.