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I love the idea that you are connected to your enemy, but i have some critique:

1. PLEASE make the game faster. Make it so the enemy matches the player´s speed.

2. The enemy often sticks to walls.

3. I love the color scheme and simple art of your game, but i noticed your UI isn´t that great, so here are some tips:

  • Use a different font then arial, especially for the story  a different font would make it much easier to read. Another thing i noticed with the story is that you could have inserted little drawings or graphics to make it less tideous to read.
  • Make the main menu aligned to the center. It´s also a cool idea you need to move to click the buttons, but just write "WASD" with a graphic of the keys and the player will get it.
  • The restart button looks less clean and modern than the rest of the graphics and UI. It seems like drawn in 2 minutes, just download one or make it fit the style more.


I hope the feedback helped you, would be nice if you could check out my submission too. :)

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1. The enemy needs to be a little bit slower but i'll make him a lot faster. Currently his speed is 159 and the players is 160. I'll change it to 159.9.

2. I'll give him a circle collider. He currently has a rect collider.

3.1: it's opensans but i get your point.

3.2: nice idea. I'll replace the text with icons

3.3: i'll replace the graphic for the restart button. it was drawn in less than 2 minutes xD