The emotions portrayed in the sentences feel very real. I quite liked that. I'm not sure I understood the mechanics of the game though. As I move my ring, the other one starts drifting away. I can catch it and grind it to a halt but nothing else happens.
Would love to hear more about the meaning of the game.
One thing: I think it would be better to submit the game as standalone exe instead of something you have to install.
Congrats on submitting!